A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx
by Anchinalu Mehari
Submission date: 13-Jan-2020 11:57PM (UTC-0500) Submission ID: 1241736699 File name: A.M_HCA_320module_1_advocacy.docx (28.51K) Word count: 1721 Character count: 9508
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12% SIMILARITY INDEX
6% INTERNET SOURCES
4% PUBLICATIONS
8% STUDENT PAPERS
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2 4% 3 3% 4 1% 5 1% 6 <1%
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A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx ORIGINALITY REPORT
PRIMARY SOURCES
Comfort Nsiah, Mate Siakwa, Jerry P. K. Ninnoni. “Registered Nurses’ description of patient advocacy in the clinical setting”, Nursing Open, 2019 Publication
nursingworld.org Internet Source
Submitted to Aspen University Student Paper
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov Internet Source
www.questia.com Internet Source
Submitted to Grand Canyon University Student Paper
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FINAL GRADE
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A.M HCA 320module 1 advocacy.docx GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
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Your title page is not formatted correctly. Please fix this before the submission of Assignment 2. Use the resources I email at the start of class as a guidel
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Do not write Introduction here. This should be the same title that is on your Title page and should not be bolded
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Purpose Sentence Required
This is a good introduction, however you did not introduce the topics you will discuss. In future papers please remember to state the purpose of your paper. Usually the purpose sentence is the last sentence in the introduction paragraph, i.e. The purpose of this paper is to discuss advocating for patients, articulate safe practices in nursing, outline how nurses can advocate for healthcare consumers, and discuss how roles change as policies change.
Additional Comment
This introduction is tool long for a 1500-2000 word count paper.
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This Level 1 Heading should be written using both upper and lowercase:
Nurses and Safe Practice
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This is not presented appropriately.
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Citation Needed Cite Source: Please use the link below to find links to information regarding specific citation styles: http://www.plagiarism.org/plag_article_citation_styles.html