Opportunities for improvement include:

• You have not integrated any elements of the multilevel model, and this is the core part of this assessment. Make sure you devote more time to this component.
• Reduce the amount of time/words devoted to the description of the disease. Make sure you focus your effort in the multi-level approach.
• Next time remember to include the source of images and graphs/tables.
• Try to find some consistent stats about TB in India overtime, so that we can analyse if the cases are increasing or decreasing overtime.

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